How do I did faceups edition two

I got a bit more clear on the lips, the eyebrows I tried to get more neat, but it still all just look so messy. I so wish I could just magically get good at this, but the only way is practice.
Also a big thanks to ~severinelovescricket and ~Chibi-Pix for helping me getting at least a tiny bit better.

If you've got helpful critique on how to do better faceups, please tell me!